Page 10, Paragraph 1: "…mistakes, and the power of good coffee and random acts of kindness..." 

• Two listed items after oxford comma – can edit to, "...mistakes, the power of good coffee, and random acts of kindness..." 

Page 17, Paragraph 2: "...maternity leaves, or FMLAs, or surgical leaves." 

• Two listed items preceded by 'or' - can edit to, "...maternity leaves, FMLAs, or surgical leaves." 

Page 17, Paragraph 2: "Some, like Florida and Arizona experience..." 

• Comma missing after Arizona – can edit to, "Some, like Florida and Arizona, experience..." 

Page 17, Paragraph 3: "Some nurses have experienced burn out..." 

• Inconsistent spelling of 'burnout' - edit to, "Some nurses have experienced burnout..." 

Page 21, Paragraph 3: "...your team will be more-than-willing to help you." 

• Unnecessary hyphens – edit to, "...your team will be more than willing to help you." 

Page 24, Paragraph 1: "To advise, educate and mentor..." 

• Missing oxford comma – edit to, "To advise, educate, and mentor..." 

Page 30, Paragraph 2: "...severe trauma, or respiratory distress, multiple organ failure..." 

• Unnecessary 'or' in middle of multiple listed items  – edit to, "...severe trauma, respiratory distress, multiple organ failure..." 

Page 32, Paragraph 4: "The procedures are minimally invasive, and the patients are not completely sedated during these procedures-they need to be able..." 

• Redundant mention of 'procedures' and hyphen that needs to either be converted to a period or a dash with spaces – can edit to either of the below options:  

  • "The procedures are minimally invasive, and the patients are not completely sedated. They need to be able..." 

  • "The procedures are minimally invasive, and the patients are not completely sedated – they need to be able..." 

Page 39, Paragraph 1: NLC updated US map by states 

• Link gives a 404 error (page not found) - either replace with correct address or remove link. 

Page 45, Paragraph 4: "...cardiac surgery, hemodialysis and microvascular surgery..." 

• Missing oxford comma – edit to, "...cardiac surgery, hemodialysis, and microvascular surgery..." 

Page 46, Paragraph 1: "...surgery, intensive care and stabilization of..." 

• Missing oxford comma – edit to, "...surgery, intensive care, and stabilization of..." 

Page 58, Paragraph 1: "...keep in mind it can be screen-shot and made public..." 

• Unnecessary hyphen – edit to, "...keep in mind it can be screenshot and made public..." 

Page 58, Paragraph 5: "...at 8 a.m. central time is not a good idea." 

• Uncapitalized time zone – edit to, "...at 8 a.m. Central Time is not a good idea."